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Rhetorical Analysis
In
this summary about Business Majors, the author tries to describe all the
qualities and expectations of a graduate in the workplace. The author also
seems to have done research on the business world to gain further knowledge
into the field. He either must be a prospecting business major or at least
influenced by something to dig deeper into this subject. The summary itself has
no visuals and that can lead to misconceptions about what the author means
about certain subjects since the business aspect of the workplace is so broad.
In
the summary the author states a lot of very factual and to the point
information which leads me to think that he has done some research into the
topic because either he is planning to become part of the business workplace or
wants to learn more about what the business world holds for him. I say this
because, not only does he go into the more fact driven parts of business, he
gets into the emotional side. By the emotional side, I mean what kind of
mentality and worth ethic is needed in a business major, which is evidence that
there is some connection or want with the business world. I say this because;
why else would the author care what the mentality of a businessman is if he didn’t
want to be one?
The
author also describes the qualities and expectations of a new businessman in a
firm. Many of these qualities are very obvious and can be assumed by the
average person, which leads me to think that the author was trying to appeal to
a very basic audience and inform them of the basic details of a businessman. He
conveys the purpose of this text by keeping all the information super simple
and easy to comprehend. This summary would appeal to anyone who was willing to
want to learn about the business major, or anyone who wants to understand how
the business world functions. The very basic information and lack of technical
words makes me think that the author was not trying to make this piece anything
but an informational paper to appeal to those wanting to look into business.
With
that being said, the style of the author is very simple. The author tries to
keep the piece very informal so that he does not turn away the average
prospecting college student from reading his summary. The sentences are very readable
and have a very insightful tone to them. The tone is well suited for the audience
because most of the people reading this article are looking for that piece of
information on business majors that will help them decide whether it’s the
major for them or not, and that is also the purpose of the summary too. The
author’s use of transition sentences is somewhat lacking, but the paper still
can be read smoothly. The similarity of all the subjects in his summary helps
the transition from paragraph to paragraph.
With
business being such a broad subject, the lack of any visuals of any sort really
can make this paper lacking because there isn’t really a specific description
of what part of business the author is talking about. There are many types of
business in the world and the author really has a very broad way of speaking
about them, it really can distract the reader because it is hard to follow what
the author is trying to convey. But what the author lacks in visuals he makes
up for in visual cues, the listing of all the information he has given in the
summary is very easy to follow and helps the reader understand and get a better
view of what he is trying to convey.
This is my final draft if there is any confusion. The text I used was my summary.
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